A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including for food and research. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
When world population increase rapid every year, animals exploting is unavoidable. Due to that, some people’s opinion say we should not exploit animals, while the opposite group consider that human must employ creatures to serve their demand. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why the second group is right.
On the one hand, there are two main reason why we should not exploit animals. The first one is a lot of animals already extinct because of human, if this status continue, sooner or later, human will be the only spieces left on earth. And without creatures, the nature process will stop, which will cause serious problems to human being. For the second reason, many individuals can’t except killing because of humanity. They consider every animals are all equal and love them, a cow is just like a dog which you can care as a close pet, so that they assume harming cows or any spieces are just like doing that with your own pet, and it’s unexceptable.
On the other hand, I believe that we can employ animals to satisfy our needs. Firstly, homo sapiens are on the top of food chain, that mean we can take that advantage to do anything we could. If someday in the future there are some more advance beings or aliens show up, we couldn’t use that resources anymore. Secondly, more than 250 kind of creatures disappear everyday, we didn’t kill them all, that’s just natural selection. Moreover, modern social have alrealdy used to having all kind of meats and fishs on their disk, a huge crisis will happen if we stop all the protein foods.
Even there’s still many debarment about the topic that we should or shouldn’t exploited animals for our conditions. Due to all the reason above, i strongly believe that make use of other spieces is more preferable. The advantage of utilizing animals is undeniable and human should continue doing it, like we always do .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...ources anymore. Secondly, more than 250 kind of creatures disappear everyday, we did...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...re than 250 kind of creatures disappear everyday, we didn’t kill them all, that’s just n...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun debarment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much debarment', 'a good deal of debarment'.
Suggestion: much debarment; a good deal of debarment
...e protein foods. Even there’s still many debarment about the topic that we should or shoul...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'shouldn't' requires base form of this verb: 'exploit'
Suggestion: exploit
...t the topic that we should or shouldn’t exploited animals for our conditions. Due to all ...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uld continue doing it, like we always do .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, as to, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80597014925 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35911864043 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1549406206 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209121965093 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674132134933 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616899517253 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135158684606 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563122027205 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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