A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the development of earth everyone taking part equally, Humans as well as animals. Many people giving equality to the fauna and they advocate that animals should be protected not be harmed for any means, In contrast, few people argue that they can be used for eating for research purposes, I will explain both the view in this essay even though in my opinion the use of animals for our benefit should be totally stopped.
Certainly, the population soar becoming a burden on the earth especially for food and new diseases are growing every year, However, human beings are responsible for these but animals are suffering for their experiment purposes, even people depending on them for food while they have lots of vegan diets available because of more dependency on the nonvegan food in recent years cause of more new disease to the human, for instance, swine flu, influenza and recently the COVID 19, In many cosmetic industries and other researchers using animals for their experiments these are not ethically correct because these things harm them at their biological traits and that cause of gene mutation in some cases. so I totally disagree with the opinion that uses animals for food and research purposes.
Secondly, some people believe that misuse or harmful activity to the animal should be banned I completely agree with this view because the animals have the same rights for living freely for instance in the zoo I saw that they provide very small shelter to the animals and they put only one or two animal but the animal requirement are different they miss their groups and their huge area because of this some animals becomes irritated so we are basically exploiting them, recent news in Kerala a pregnant elephant bit by some people just for their entertainment purposes this type of behavior not acceptable this is the reason that animal should be protected.
Encapsulation, The unfair treatment with the animal should be banned completely and in the other hand for research and food purpose they use them ethically, I believe that victimizing animals for anything should be stop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 703, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopped'?
Suggestion: stopped
...timizing animals for anything should be stop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00284090909 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48642849082 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 250.043607308 49.4020404114 506% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.5 106.682146367 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.6666666667 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 7.06120827912 283% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396217159735 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209698112327 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890535133757 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2662213418 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026739383677 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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