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Today, the government wants to improve public health instead of spending money on treating people. However, I believe this is a short-sighted view, I only agree in part, the two views will support each other.
An objective view is that the government government " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">should be concerned about health care services as external impacts that undermine human health. The cause of this situation may be due to illness, accident, genetic disease. therefore, investing in medical equipment or improving doctors' qualifications is a must to provide people's chances of living. Secondly, the government should do to support hospitals that are building more facilities in areas where there are difficulties. this this " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">is done to minimize the road segment and the risk of moving long distances to the city for treatment.
In addition to investing in medical equipment and pharmaceuticals, investing in long-term health for everyone is also essential. Daily exercise every morning with modern and handy devices will help people get excited to develop their health. this helps us with resistance and longevity. A simple fact that you can realize is that exercising at 6 am instead of sleeping until 9 am or 10 am will make it clear and healthy to do everything. The next thing we get when the government invests in its own health is eliminating social evils. instead of using stimulants such as cigarettes, alcohol and bad habits such as gambling, people will have a more optimistic view of life. therefore, improving the work efficiency and economy of the country.
In short, should not focus on improving public health, the government should invest in both issues in parallel to complement each other.
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- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The internet has transformed lives and economies, but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment. 56
- Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: government
...h other. An objective view is that the government government ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 2, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... to illness, accident, genetic disease. therefore, investing in medical equipment or impr...
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Line 2, column 435, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...r improving doctors qualifications is a must to provide peoples chances of living. Seco...
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Line 2, column 607, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... in areas where there are difficulties. this this ' style='color: rgb51, 5...
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Line 2, column 607, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
... in areas where there are difficulties. this this ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...le get excited to develop their health. this helps us with resistance and longevity....
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Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...own health is eliminating social evils. instead of using stimulants such as cigarettes,...
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Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ll have a more optimistic view of life. therefore, improving the work efficiency and econ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51342281879 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29757197067 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3537173066 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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