It is commonly accepted by people that happiness is a very important part in their lives. While the diversity of human being makes the happiness difficult to define, there must be some common factors that related with the achievement of happiness.
Happiness is quite hard to define largely because its meaning varied among different individuals. Nobody can fully understand and experience other person's feeling, and we all have our own defined source to derive pleasure. For example, some people derive a sense of happiness from receiving salary or winning gambling, while for others, doing sports, like playing basketball and soccer may bring them a sense of satisfaction. At the same time, people receive different amount of happiness even if they are in the same situation, simply because other emotions like excitement and peacefulness have more or less some inherent relations with happiness intensity.
Although it seems impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people still believe that there are some factors effecting the production of happiness. Firstly, it is hard for a person to feel happiness if he or she does not have a safe place to live or enough food to eat. Facing the risk of starving to death, people's mind will all concentrate on how to survival and hardly pay attention to please themself. Secondly, on most cases, happiness delivered from interaction, which is a natural result of the fact that human being is a group specie who are not used to living in complete isolation. Other key factors could be freedom and some life expectation such as homework scores and work achievement.
In conclusion, it is difficult to define the happiness because of the people diversity, and the realization of several factors contributing to the happiness production may help us to explore this secret.
- The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. 73
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 95
- The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996 78
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8011785499 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7259401491 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275009756685 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980542741045 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783103055955 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185604963637 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778854100159 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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