The 3 pie charts describe the percentages of money spent for different purposes, the population in different parts of the world and consumption of resources by them.
Overall, it can be seen that, while USA and Europe constitute only a quarter of the world population, they consume almost two thirds of the world resources.
According to the first pie chart, majority of the world economy is almost 40 percent is spent of other uses. Food uses one-fourth of the world expenditure. This is followed by transport and housing at 18 and 12 percent respectively. The least amount was spent on clothing just six percent.
Coming to the world population , Asia has the highest number of residents of more than half of the global population. Europe and America share the same percentage of people at !4 percent each. Only 10 percent of people live in Africa. Other nations form the minority.
Almost 60perecnt of world resources are consumed by the developed countries in Europe and America, while other nations utilize the rest of the 40 percent
- computer technology has had more of a negative than a positive impact on society.How far do you agree with this statement? 81
- The bar chart below shows the reasons for internet usage among British adults(2001) 59
- scientists and new media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change the lifestyle to prevent further damage. what are your views 73
- Describe the diagram about the hydroelectric dam 63
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Least'.
Suggestion: The Least
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...ly 10 percent of people live in Africa. other nations form the minority. Almost 60pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98275862069 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70207780972 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2907308375 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138006691015 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493351932413 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483454458476 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823348356007 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309899982643 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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