One of the challenging concepts to define is happiness, and I believe this difficulty is rooted in various individuals’ attitude that have towards happiness. Wealth and health have always deemed as contributing factors describing contentment.
It is indisputable fact that due to each person has a specific conception towards happiness, there is not a comprehensive definition for it. For example, being happy from a champion’s perspective means to earn a gold medal in the Olympics games, while passing exams with flying colour are the real meaning of happiness for students at school. In fact, considering plenty of factors ranging from age, gender, and job to religious and cultural background make it hard for experts to develop a widely accepted definition for happiness.
Nevertheless, there two significant factors which lead to people to find happiness mostly in their life. First and foremost, it is wealth that all people put all efforts throughout their whole life to possess. For many people, money is the chief resources of happiness because it assists them to acquire what they want such as an outstanding house, world-class machine and beautiful spouse. Apart from that, sex is the deniable origin of being happy. In particular, having sex with a beloved one in a romantic and tranquil place result in people feel true happiness for a while. Actually, sexual relationships help to release some hormones in the human body which bring about people being happy.
In conclusion, whereas introducing an approved definition because of involving contributing factors is an arduous task, I am in this belief wealth and sex can bring real delight to individual’s lives.
- Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world.What are your opinions on this? 61
- Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree? 67
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people think that telling the truth is not always essential It is necessary to tell lies sometimes To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35074626866 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09074171349 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6357040141 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160137495983 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524309740203 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460102778147 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829660044642 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275223985324 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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