Have many people choose live and work abroad because higher of living and find outside their country. Do you think it bring advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are too many people like work and live abroad of the living conditions they can find outside their home country. Although the ideas potential drawbacks appear to be reasonable, living abroad still would had paid some disadvantages. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some argument in favour of live and work in other countries. First, government subsidies for higher education or equalize educational opportunities among young people than their home country and they couldn't found in their home country. This living conditions support, presumably, tends not only to increase the overall people could spoken many languages rare of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority when they can't find what they need in their home country but when live and work abroad did, which eventually promotes an egalitarian and knowledge society, bring the country to the shoulder of a power in five countries. Second, choose live and work abroad would probably result in a greater supply of highly qualified workers, prove our workers to other countries and spread their culture or traditions, which benefits society in the long run. It, instead, it is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant would be far more significant than the minor benefits once have many people live and work abroad. First, proportion of foreign settlement would likely correspond with a tremendous workers strain on a country. Everyone always choose work and live abroad because they want to find outside their home country, their country would generating no income from workers and job, government could become over-reliant on the state budget for funding, meaning that there would less input to develop other important areas such as the healthcare system and transport infrastructure. Example, good program such as Olympia in Vietnam, every candidates can going to other countries for working and living in American or European, these are developed countries. However, meaning that our country handing over talents to other countries, which have many disadvantages in the long run. Second, live and work abroad would tempt many young people including those who are not academically inclined or show no interest college pursuit, thereby adding great burdens for government admission and enrolment staff and potentially wasting time that these young people cod have spent pursuing more suitable career paths in their country.
I were discussed both sides of the argument. In conclusion, despise the ideas of safety and assimilation difficulties, the foreign residence would had merits overshadow demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e reasonable, living abroad still would had paid some disadvantages. This essay wil...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...people than their home country and they couldnt found in their home country. This livin...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have spoken' or 'speak'?
Suggestion: have spoken; speak
...ly to increase the overall people could spoken many languages rare of lower-income peo...
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Line 2, column 465, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... their feeling of inferiority when they cant find what they need in their home count...
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Line 2, column 690, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to live'
Suggestion: to live
...power in five countries. Second, choose live and work abroad would probably result i...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
...uld likely correspond with a tremendous workers strain on a country. Everyone always ch...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'generate'
Suggestion: generate
...their home country, their country would generating no income from workers and job, governm...
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Message: Did you mean 'was'?
Suggestion: was
...table career paths in their country. I were discussed both sides of the argument. I...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...fficulties, the foreign residence would had merits overshadow demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50462962963 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75713005097 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560185185185 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.15103216 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.625 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385430898357 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120316902986 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103176175843 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215837077351 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125388016165 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.