In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? Give reasons and make some suggestions.
In many homeland, increasingly juvenile people are leaving school and incapable to find jobs after commencement. In modern life, education is undeniably important. It is necessary for success. The problem here is clearly seen that is unemployed and shortage of human resource for large companies.
From the perspective of sociology, education in school is very important process in “shaping” human personality and behavior. Each person will only develop when receiving an education that is family and school. That is two environment in which each person is molded, equipped with the background knowledge and attitudes that can join the society. Whenever, there is a person leaving school then society will lose a talent and have a defective person. People are often leaving school and unable to find jobs after graduation, so they don’t know behavior and socially acceptable jobs. Therefore, the rate of theft appears to be high among those who drop out of school. Those are the harmful effects of school drop out son society l. With harm to the individual of those who drop out is don’t have respect of society because in now life. If you don’t have degree you can’t prove that you can do something for society and that you can only do hard work, get scolded by others, living in society with leaving school is very difficult.
In Vietnam, Accor to paper about the rate leaving school are 200,000 people drop out every year. More and more have leaving school by more reason including: not having enough money to go to school, the family forced to work hard and prevented them from going to school,…. The best solution here is school-family-government must create conditions for students to go to school economically, families must encourage their children not to drop out of school. Only by working together and coming up with solutions can this serious situation be overcome.
From the above essay, this serious situation can be seen. But just trying to find a solution will fix it. In the future, I hope that the government will fix it and pay more attention the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun homeland seems to be countable; consider using: 'many homelands'.
Suggestion: many homelands
In many homeland, increasingly juvenile people are leavi...
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Line 2, column 784, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...the individual of those who drop out is don’t have respect of society because in no...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
... and prevented them from going to school,…. The best solution here is school-famil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99140401146 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7746126544 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530085959885 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5531985384 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265130523134 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737728056658 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685676255994 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151021330325 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353566954605 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.