Walking is a fundamental excercise for being healthy although some in recent time it is often preferred by peole.
There are several reason behind such a trend; nevertheless, several steps could be benifited to motivate. Both the aspects are analysed in ensuing paragraph.
Numerious causes found behind the unfamiliarity of walking excercise. The prinicipal one is that hectic lifestyle in which this moderen genetation is living. By this i mean that in this recent time no one have sufficient time to walk while thay travellnig to work. It has been seen that in life of many people financial wealth is more important than physical weath. Majority of working professionals choose efficient and timesaving transportation to reach at workplace in the rush to earn more money and walking is not one of them. Moreover, in some cities, government failed to provide proper infrastructure to the pedestrians. Not space is available to walk in the road flooded with fast moving vehicals. Due to this overloaded road majority of innocent poeple became a victim of accident and their safety safety destroyed. Apart from that, The lack of awarness about the lifelong benefits of such a practices have been noticed.
Despite this challenge, there are numerious ways to resolve this issue. Firstly, government have to think on how to reduce the distance between citycenter and resident area. This can be done by creating on campus resident in both private and government sector. Providing hostels, canteen, liberary, and loundry to the students on educational premises, so that they can walk inside the campus rather than travelling to city through personal or public transport. Secondly, constructing footpath alngside the main route and developing joggers park across the metropolitan. This may be beneficial for elder peole. Finally, awarness campaign at schools, industries, and crowded centers should helps to inspire individual to take walking as a serious matter for being healthy.
In conclusion, it must be said that modifying current infrastructure and satisftying the need of all the citizen is a chellanging task for the administration. However, i believe that amalgamation of authority and individaul can lead such an issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35795454545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97605262127 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616477272727 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8702283464 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8095238095 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259346868985 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629922011685 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448600529135 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118072068878 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609405041352 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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