Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have made the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent times, health care facilities which are private have made a significant mark in society compared to a government run institution. While, a certain group of people have benefitted from their services, I believe its demerits outweigh the benefits.
To begin with, in the modern era, sectors of all class have tried to improve their standards of services. The private health care services introduced outstanding facilities which includes lesser wait periods for their clients, great servicing etc. To illustrate, more private hospitals are tied with top tier doctors across the city to ensure they provide a great deal of service to their patients. In addition, many facilities offer insurance and follow-up treatment even after discharging the patients.
On the contrary, a wide range of people of the society who have limited funds often struggles to pay the large bills generated from the private hospitals.
Furthermore, majority of the patients who comes to these hospitals generally belongs to the upper class of the society because they can afford the expenses which the poors cannot, bringing out the imbalance in the society. In recent times, a family lost a dear one due to the fact that the could not manage the cost of the treatment.
Also, the less privileged people seems to get ignored in the private health services even if it is a case of an emergency. But in the government owned hospitals, people from all class do get the same treatment,and in current days the quality of services offered there has improved a lot.
In conclusion, though private health care provides good beneficiaries, but their services is mainly rich-people centered. So, considering this fact I believe it has more drawback than the benefits as the huge number of people are disregarded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16095890411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76977316156 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9163789149 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272432799337 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947099111963 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972966822473 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12891106679 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670315376939 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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