Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
It is true that everybody wants to be happy in life. Defining happiness is not so easy because people have different perspectives towards it. However, there are few common things required to achieve happiness.
To begin with,happiness is hard to define because it varies from person to person. Not everyone sees it through the same eyes. People have their own perception of being happy. Some people, for example, think that having enough money on owning luxury came is the definition of happiness, while others think that staying together with family and having a stable relationship with them is the true meaning of happiness . Simultaneously, getting a job ore hearing a good news can be defined as happiness for a certain moment. So, a person can feel happy in thousand of ways.
while defining happiness seems undoable, people believe that there are few fundamental needs that should be met in order to gain it. First of all, people should have enough food to survive, clothes to wear and a shelter to live. It is impossible for human being to be happy without there things. Secondly, a person must have someone to share experiences of life or else he/she will lead a life without happiness. It's also important to be contented with what we have. These factors is significant and can influence the way of acquiring ecstasy
In conclusion, happiness is nearly impossible to explain with words as its subjective, but I believe that fulfilling our basic needs and relationships will help us to experience it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , happiness
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...th them is the true meaning of happiness . Simultaneously, getting a job ore heari...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
... moment. So, a person can feel happy in thousand of ways. while defining happiness seem...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...on can feel happy in thousand of ways. while defining happiness seems undoable, peop...
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96456692913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.753778991 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.6403382829 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228448780791 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796839994274 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520934617195 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140837798602 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551062805067 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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