The maps illustrate the modifications that took place at Queen Mary Hospital during a a 40-year period starting from 1960.
Overall, many major changes were made to the hospital area apart from hospital which remained unchanged. There includes building of cancer centre, nursing school, pharmacy and car park.
In 1960, the hospital was built close to the main road. A shopping centre was located in left to the hospital. People constructed a car park behind the hospital for those going to receive medical care. The remaining area was covered by the farmland.
However, few significant development occurred in 1980 and in 2000. In 1980, the farmland section was no longer available and instead the construction of nursing School can be seen. Similarly, the shopping mall was demolished in order to make a way fore two additional buildings namely cancer centre and pharmacy. By the year 2000, car park was divided into half to provide space for a new nursing school. The cancer centre was expanded, which occupied the entire area of previous nursing school.
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- The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he farmland. However, few significant development occurred in 1980 and in 2000...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13218390805 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5689398029 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3343881645 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4166666667 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114889076164 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04276738451 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643486687366 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936788542446 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759088913678 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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