The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising but not the real need of the society where such products are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is no doubt that excessive consumerism results from imaginary need of purchasers, however, this situation might be caused by other factors. First, since the coverage of attractive advertisements becomes ubiquitous, buyers are prone to making a purchase right away without any aware of the real need. In fact, the rampant use of pull strategy such as price discount, buy one get one free has literally driven the unnecessary demand, which in turn leads to a redundancy shopping habit. Second, in order to adapt to higher standard of living the trend of buying beyond demand with an aim of improving the increase in consuming is essential. For example, consumers currently get used to buying clean and healthy food in lieu of the custom of solely care for sufficient amount, which clarifies the incentive of buying excessively popular products.
In short, although in one way exaggerate advertisings do induce customers to overbought, some other effects need to be taken into account thoroughly. By considering all the pros and cons carefully before making a decision to purchase for something, buyers might reap plenty of benefits through advertisement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, for example, in fact, in short, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26486486486 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90205337747 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724324324324 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.1848599556 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 139.142857143 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975812685253 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411247021626 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029230844496 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07181820007 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141380220084 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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