Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.What do you think are the main causes of this problems and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Nowadays the increase in homeless people is the main concern across several nations in the world. Hence many adverse impacts are seriously affecting human beings and solutions need to emerge urgently to address this issue. This essay will examine its causes and suggest some suitable solutions.
Turning to the causes of this growing problems.First and foremost,due to migration from other countries and from suburban areas to the city center there is a lack of means of adapting to living standards.It includes food,capacity,houses and also jobs.In addition,high standards of living are required in the city to keep pace with human development.Therefore,two of these factors contribute to the homeless’s difficulties.In other words,those people who live in the street struggle with affording to make ends meet and the number of the homeless has been increasing more and more,which results in high rate illiteracy,the appearance of depraved culture and a further potential decline in country’s economic growth.
As a consequence of those effects,essential solutions should be deployed as soon as possible.The Government should support homeless people by both material and spiritual worth.For instance,homelessness should be given sufficient money,clothes and other means of living.Moreover, the government should encourage them to move to remote areas for earning a living by supporting all those basic needs and creating more suitable careers to their levels.By doing this,the homeless may have stable jobs and be able to develop their life day by day.
In conclusion,it is obvious that there are many probable causes of the increase in homeless rates and the government should come up with more new policies to support the homeless through many ways such as donating money or creating more jobs.Therefore,the homeless’s life might be much better and the depraved society can be eradicated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60763888889 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54150156206 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 244.270342039 49.4020404114 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.166666667 106.682146367 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 20.7667163134 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.1666666667 7.06120827912 328% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191227467891 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105973204781 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034568413808 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126202215683 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446185895522 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60763888889 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54150156206 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 244.270342039 49.4020404114 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.166666667 106.682146367 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 20.7667163134 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.1666666667 7.06120827912 328% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191227467891 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105973204781 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034568413808 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126202215683 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446185895522 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.15 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.