The entire world is suffering from the increasing number of homeless society and this situation is very common for the metropolises in China and India. Nowadays, the governments are deeply concerned about the consequences of this catastrophe, and an abundance of economists are suggesting many solutions to it but still, we do not see the results of suggestions. For that reason, this essay aims to detect the major causes of dwelling without a home and to find resolutions for this circumstance.
Firstly, we can witness that many people live poorly and also, they are not able to get accommodation because of their poverty. Secondly, this context causes to spread of disease inside the population and responsible agencies should build small shelters for homeless individuals to prevent dangerous illnesses. In addition, if they are ill, they should be isolated quickly by special sanitary organizations. Thirdly, politics emphasize that overpopulation is the major reason for rising the number of homelessness. As a result of that belief, for example, there is a strong limitation to giving a baby in China, and females must not bear more than two children I suppose this is the best way to decrease the number of human beings who are residing in the street.
The next cause for that key problem is that products are ridiculously expensive in the shops and this overprices trigger to dwell without residence and I strongly recommend that authorities need to originate more facilities for the public who lack in money. For instance, the most wealthy kingdom on earth by people's net worth is the United Arab Emirates and the rate of homelessness is significantly low. Thus, any government needs to be rich to maintain its society at home.
In conclusion, the method of Chine to decline the number of homeless people is very effective and this strategy needs to be used in other places which have a problem with homelessness.
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Suggestion: spreading
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08176100629 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92322280999 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600628930818 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.0403500465 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171604182619 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611430129674 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321490761651 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107904284978 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035442105702 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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