Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
An increasing concern for many people around the world is that homelessness has been rising for a long time. This essay will discuss why the number of penniless people has been increasing and provide some potential solution in order to minimize this issue.
To begin with, some people cannot afford their own accommodation as house prices have soared beyond their means. One of the primary factors to take into account is that more and more people start to move from rural areas to urban that leads to rising house rent fee. After increasing the renting fee result in homeless rate increasing. Perhaps another factor is that mental health problems can drive people onto the streets. Some people have psychological issues and they are not able to live a normal life, which means that abnormal life is more likely to lead to them onto the street. For example, the researcher has proven that most of the homelessness people have mental health problems, so they are unfunctional to live in society.
There are a variety of viable solutions at hand to address this problem. The primary solution would be is that more free and affordable housing should be provided for people on low income and the unemployed. If governments apply this method, as a consequence the rate of homeless people is likely to be decreased. Secondly, rehabilitation programmers should tackle the social exclusion of homeless people. Treatment is one of the key factors to cope with mental health issues. For instance, a number of studies have proven that physiological patients are possibly able to integrate into society again after drugs-treatment.
In conclusion, it must be said that homelessness has become a complex issue with no easy solutions. Although many causes can be triggered to rise homeless people, solutions are easily to be applied with authorizes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09570957096 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7288081912 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4466105462 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144490918306 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539518835482 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498359160392 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106662369648 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454733336775 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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