How to make a good impression on a classmate

Essay topics:

How to make a good impression on a classmate?

Making a good impression on a classmate is essential for our learning. There are several way to make it. Firstly, you have to be a friendly person to people around you. For examples, when you meet them, you begin with small talk about somethings like homework or weather. Besides, you may create sympathy with them by your smile. Secondly, being well-behaved is one of the important factors to attract your classmates. For instance, you must polite and actively give your ideas about class lectures. Helping each together is another way to make good impression on a classmate. Sometimes we can help your friends in small things such as hygiene classes. In addition, you should also get the help of others. Finally, making a good impression on a classmate is not always difficult if you take the initiative to build that relationship.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'several ways'.
Suggestion: several ways
...s essential for our learning. There are several way to make it. Firstly, you have to be a f...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 141.0 315.596192385 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91489361702 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 4.20363070211 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72755667479 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1465908824 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8181818182 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242047677383 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114970706559 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170082890279 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242047677383 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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