The criteria for judging human worth change alongside the unstoppable development of society. We are living in the age of modernity when people make remarks about one another in accordance with their hierarchical positions and opulence in lieu of moral values. It is undeniable that power and wealth are significant element in assessment; however, it is by no means certain that the importance of conventional values will be eclipsed
In this epoch of rising pop culture and social media, a soaring population seems to appreciate famous people immersed in ostentatious extravagance rather than those who are renowned for their virtue. Even if the affluent celebrities are notorious for their rudeness, they still acquire an enormous number of admirers who fancy the lavish lifestyle of the stars. A clear example is that Charlie D’Amelio, a famous young tiktoker, appears with a glossy look and myriads of luxury items on a daily basis on the internet. Despite her controversy of childish and ungrateful behavior last year, there are still millions of people who support her career on different social platforms. Not only the influence of the culture and media but also pragmatism is an element leading to the favoritism of mankind for the charismatic. Many people yearn to befriend others from the upper class as they believe that they will acquire many privileges when doing that. It is the same to some people from the high class since they are reluctant to make close contact with those living in low conditions for fear of lacking auspiciousness.
On the flip side, I presume that moral values still hold a paramount position in the way mankind assesses someone’s worth. When it comes to relationships, it is important that human beings choose their friends, soulmates and lovers based on their nature rather than their assets. Genuine personalities play an indispensable part in maintaining good relationships between people and one another. Turning to the working environment, recruiters mainly pay attention to employees’ attitude and motivation to hire or promote them. Thus, assessments based on the traditional measure will be eternal amid the changing world.
In conclusion, a person’s nature should be accurately evaluated in accordance with not only their property and job titles, but also their inner values. That is the best method of evaluation in this community. HA
- Human beings are being judged according to their social status and material possession Old fashioned values such as kindness and trust seems no longer important To what extent do you agree or disagree 350 words 73
- Human beings are being judged according to their social status and material possession Old fashioned values such as kindness and trust seems no longer important To what extent do you agree or disagree 350 words 84
- Human beings are being judged according to their social status and material possession Old fashioned values such as kindness and trust seems no longer important To what extent do you agree or disagree 350 words 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26892950392 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89565199848 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595300261097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8078339409 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.125 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147749840942 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416559848946 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508985939881 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990327087426 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369949617568 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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