The humankind should own only one authority rather than a national regime for each nation. In my point of view. While I agree that the whole world has a common political system, I also agree that it still has a lot of harm.
On the one hand, humanity has a common government that can greatly simplify procedures. Firstly, moving between countries will be simpler, saving time and money. That is because the sharing of a political system causes the border to be abolished, procedures such as applying for a passport, applying for a VISA no longer exist, or reducing airfares like traveling domestically. Secondly, the whole world has a common state that helps maintain peace and cooperation among countries. This would therefore there will be no more war, instead a common government of the world would help nations work together to develop together.
On the other hand, the world owns a political system that would lose the national identity of each country. For example, if the United States and Vietnam had the same government, traditional Vietnamese characteristics such as pho or ao dai might cease to exist, or the countries' own languages could be erased if the world share a common language. Secondly, when the whole world shares a political system, it will make it difficult for governments to adequately address the needs of people around the globe. That is because the number of people worldwide is really too large, making it impossible for the government to cover the entire population and meet their needs in a timely manner, and certain groups of people such as the disabled or the poor would suffer losses.
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- The humankind should own only one authority rather than a national regime for each nation In my point of view While I agree that the whole world has a common political system I also agree that it still has a lot of harm 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a timely manner" with adverb for "timely"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... entire population and meet their needs in a timely manner, and certain groups of people such as t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, therefore, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06493506494 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73081608614 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593073593074 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3792355756 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184593417145 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826046782371 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607114661777 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14939624551 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149137492452 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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