I Many countries traditional food is replaced by international food.this trend has many adverse effect on individuals and family.do you agree or disagree with the give statement?
The eating habits of people are drastically changed over a couple of years. Presently,in many nations, International food is on the priority list of folks rather than their cultural food. This trend has more perilous effects on both people and family.Here ,I would like to accord with the given statement firmly.
There are ample number of points to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, the health standard of folks is declining day by day with excessive consumption of junk food. To justify, masses have to face distinct health ailments such as obesity,fat etc.when they consume continental food. Therefore,the international food is not much beneficial for the health of people. Apart from it, giving more preference to international food is the main reason behind declining the harmonious bonding among family members and individuals.To demonstrate,in this competitive era,as everybody has busiest schedule and they have no enough time to cook home made food . Consequently,this trend has adverse effect on people's bonding.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Initially, giving more places to international food also hurts the ethical value of our traditional food culture.To be specific,in this contemporary world, youngster are not interested in learn recipies of culture food and they have the tendency to eat food in international restaurants. Therefore, giving preference to international food holds no importance as it adversely effect our cultural values.
To recapitulate, undeniably, it is well said that health is wealth. Undeniably,there are some benefits of eating international food but we never underestimate it's drawbacks.Therefore, it is the prime responsibility of people to prefer traditional cuisines as it has remarkable contribution in improving our health standard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64102564103 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4264378467 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7654704963 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334451863071 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102001600783 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808448133291 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198101640498 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742982529201 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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