These days people are planning for alternative careers paths, or we could name as multiple money earning ways to map with current trending society needs and lifestyles. As certain demographics think that depending on single entity has become old fashioned. So, they are upgrading themselves to meet ongoing style.
The pictorial representation of Bar graphs, held last year survey, in further education was drastically increased its number, almost tripled the count. This also crazed everyone on further education to lead a better life. Some people are encouraging their children education number in high just because of the personal that they would like to portray it to the public this is other side of the coin though.
Investigation department took last year survey, analyzed and speculated that the more technology would emerge in future if the education rises its number. As more inventions takes place, manual work gets automated, robust technologies will be used. With the more advanced skills manual intervention takes the least position.
Nowadays, many people example plumbers, mechanics, sweepers and many more they are reluctant to accommodate their positions in future to children. Because they have seen deteriorated situations in their life, as they have to work under adverse climatic situations some time times and most of them sticks to a single source of income as they don't have proper education. By making all the points they are reluctant to put children in their positions.
Looking at all the situations most of the children getting better education which leveraged their skills and provided wide number of opportunities as well as excelled their careers.
- Recycling our waste is a big issue today. A lot of people feel that others are not recycling enough and that the government should make it a legal requirement. In your opinion, should laws be needed to ensure that people recycle their waste? 56
- Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples. 56
- In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.Use your own ideas, knowledge and experien 73
- Recycling our waste is a big issue today. A lot of people feel that others are not recycling enough and that the government should make it a legal requirement. In your opinion, should laws be needed to ensure that people recycle their waste? 55
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... trending society needs and lifestyles. As certain demographics think that dependi...
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Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ks to a single source of income as they dont have proper education. By making all th...
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Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ber of opportunities as well as excelled their careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41886792453 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74063602028 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5982431699 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133213407319 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421240856737 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404373957599 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635882571324 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302996777332 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.