Certain people think that zoos should be shut down as it offence to keep animals in cages, at certain point of time, animals lose their inbuilt capability to hunt and eat, because they completely depend for food on Zoo admins. Others state that admitting wild life in zoo makes their life much safer compared to forests, because they are killing these animals in order to get money out of them. Let's discuss both the views and come to the conclusion.
Last year survey on shutdown of zoos gave bizarre results, that most of them vote to free the animals. Because putting the animals in zoos will lose their natural tendency of hunting, so, other predators can easily harm them as they would not be having defeating skills for their survival. Some demographics compare caging animals is just like placing the children in crib not allowing them to enjoy the freedom to move around.
The other hand of the people opine that expansion of artificial wild life is for animals, considering their safety and security. They even shown evidences brutally killing the animals and sold money making products out of them. Considering protection point of view many voiced their vote for raising number of zoos to be admitted by the government.
According to me keeping a animals in cage is cruel as we grab their freedom to enjoy, at the same time we can not give clear chit to stay animals in wild life as it harms their lives. The government should provide strict rules not to harm any wild life so that all the animals can stay happily with enjoying their freedom.
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- In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
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- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ages, at certain point of time, animals loose their inbuilt capability to hunt and ea...
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Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...mals in order to get money out of them. Lets discuss both the views and come to the ...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ecause putting the animals in zoos will loose their natural tendency of hunting, so, ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...os to be admitted by the government. According to me keeping a animals in cage is cruel as w...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... government. According to me keeping a animals in cage is cruel as we grab the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75367647059 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26226651952 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0687592465 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.545454545 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 7.06120827912 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211678077318 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844547419725 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044714238245 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133682277172 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356120874935 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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