IELTS Writing Task 2: Some People Work For The Same Organization All Their Working Life. Others Think That It Is Better To Work For Different Organizations. Discuss Both These Views And Give Your Own Opinion.
Getting a professional life is a "sweet" challange in each individual's life. The fact that there are various paths to reach the peak of one's life brings about endless arguments. Some opinions are in favor of the idea to have only one job until they retire while in other's perspective, switching jobs provide job attainments. Personally, working for diversed companies fulfills my hope.
Considering the proficient development as well as the familiar environment, it is comprehensible for people to work for the same place . Once you get acquainted to the job environment, earn substantial salary and have dependable co-workers, there is no motivation to change your job. An illustration is that nearly 3 million British being government employees tend to have no thoughts of getting to another workplace. Futhermore, your life would be extremely comfortable with assurance of having a considerable opportunity to promote and no scary of being fired suddenly.
In contrast, shifting jobs for various companies is an arduous path. As a result of the desire to seek for multitalented employees of managers, people without being an erudition or a skilled labour would be definitely laid off. Whereas, for instance, the employer does not have any hesitation paying the highest salary for someone who expertise making different platforms, programming languages and solving problem excellently. Hence, if you are privileged in a certain field, not only getting a higher standard of living but also enlarging your white-collar knowledge are within your reach?
In conclusion, sticking to a company for a long term is benifical for professional growth while altering companies stimulates personal and professional life. The decision depends on your viewpoint, however, it is expected to opt for changing organizations for a more brilliant career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Getting a professional life is a 'sweet' challange in each ind...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...s a 'sweet' challange in each individuals life. The fact that there are various p...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... are various paths to reach the peak of ones life brings about endless arguments. So...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le for people to work for the same place . Once you get acquainted to the job envi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46853146853 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23325798424 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8307859732 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227819673108 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789668444526 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665585925286 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136325091658 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150083253245 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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