If people have a chance to choose between living their life without work and spending most of their time on work, most of them could choose not to work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When faced with the dilemma of working or not working, a majority of people tend to opt for the latter. While there might be some truth in this statement, I am of the view that work is an essential part of our lives and people cannot rest for so long.
Tendency to relax is inherent to all people, so it would be sensible to argue that most people would choose not to work if there was a chance. For example, most working people are familiar with the feeling of looking forward to going on vacations to different parts of the world and resting at home on weekends, after busy days, weeks and months of work. They feel like leaving all the accumulated workplace stress, arguments with colleagues and daily monotonous tasks behind and relax. In addition to this, statistically, a high percentage of people are dissatisfied with their jobs. Therefore, if there were an opportunity not to work, on condition that everything is provided, they would, by all means, choose not to work.
Nevertheless, I strongly feel that these people should think about the longer term. By doing so, they eventually come to realize that life is not only about relaxation and resting. The recent COVID-19 pandemic, for instance, taught us the value of work, and most of us became bored at home without any meaningful activities and tasks. This implies that work is an indispensable part of our lives, adding meaning and color to it. Another reason why people would choose to work is associated with the feeling of social obligation. If important positions, such as doctors and teachers, are not filled willingly, we are highly likely to experience collapse of civilizations in the long run. Therefore, rational individuals who look into the future when provided with this dilemma will definitely choose to work and contribute to their society positively.
Overall, people might choose not to work when there is a chance to do so. However, when they realize the importance of working and the value it has on their lives, they tend to change their minds about their decisions.
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| 2021-05-10 | Daryl Dixon | 73 | view |
| 2021-05-10 | Egamberganov Diyorbek | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87464387464 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63356374326 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549857549858 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5808937493 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.9375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345912282782 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118699634328 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762121661307 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230858903825 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594356120504 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.