Some people think city planners should create more green space and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new houses.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Cities today are sprawling faster than ever. While some maintain that city space should be allocated to the creation of green places, others are of the opinion that construction of new houses is more important. I believe that city planners should be building both given how essential they are to city inhabitants’ living.
On the one hand, it is reasonable to argue that building new residential areas is the right use of available city space as space is an expensive commodity. Over the past years, accommodation prices in urban areas have risen considerably, and it is primarily because space shortage is driving up the prices. If city land was utilized to create more places of nature, city dwellers would be paying even more in the form of higher rent prices and taxes that would be needed to maintain those places. Even if this financial reason could be avoided, space shortage is an issue waiting in line to be addressed in this respect. World Bank projections show that the world population is expected to grow at a steady rate and reach 9 billion people by 2050, and to accommodate this many people, space in cities will have to be wisely used.
However, I do also think that cities benefit from creation of more green space in a number of ways. Firstly, natural landscapes built in cities add to the aesthetic appeal of the city infrastructure. Given how monotonous concrete buildings appear, parks and gardens would be needed to bring color to the look of the cities. Secondly, studies have shown that green spaces reinforce the overall well-being of city dwellers; there is certainly a value in trees creating clean oxygen for people to breathe. People who have more access to natural places tend to be more psychologically sound and happier.
In conclusion, considering the arguments put forward in favor of both sides, I would argue that city planners should focus on building houses as well as green spaces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...lanners should focus on building houses as well as green spaces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91131498471 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65201978721 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9038436031 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342472310724 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120717213001 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977996923918 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239087544854 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100940455733 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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