Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
Immigration has a significant impact on our contemporary society. Each year, more and more people leave their home countries and move to another country. This essay will throw light on the reasons and the consequences.
In my view, the main reason of immigration is a strong desire of better quality of life and safe future. People move to developed countries for the better employment opportunities, and therefore, to get higher income. Moreover, rules are followed stringently in the developed countries so people feel more secure over there. For instance, labour migration from India to USA and Dubai is caused by these factors. Also, they provide better facilities to the refugees like security, safe future for their children.
However, sometimes migration causes more problems than it solves, resulting in negative consequences for both immigrants and the countries. First of all, refugees can't find jobs due to language incompatability and difficult to adapt. Also, education specialist don't get those jobs what they were looking for. Moreover, some people do not get proper medical care at the starting according to the seriousness of disease as doctors prefer light treatment in the initial stages.
To recapitulate the points, I think that people immigrate to have better life prospects. However, people immigrating should consider outcomes before making decision to leave their homeland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59907834101 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85702393093 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672811059908 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2880433751 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173107021159 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606815686641 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774392517371 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103344134262 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028967534373 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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