The impact that growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is
a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit
the number of people traveling by air is to increase taxes on flights.
To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?
Toady, we live in 21st century and technology reaches its peak. Due to advancement in technology, air transportation is introduced. It influence environment very badly and it is major issue for many nations. Some people opine that rise in taxes on air travelling is a good solution for reducing the number of ai passengers. According to me, this method is not much effective. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
Most of the passengers travelling by air means are rich or belongs to the high community. The number of individuals from mediocre class are very smaller than the rich class. If the price of tickets increases due to rise in tax, then it will not effect high community but it can be effective in reducing number of travellers from mediocre families. Overall, thee would not be large difference seen. So, this resolution is not beneficial to limit the number of people travelling by air.
Nevertheless, the funds collected by money due to increase in prices of tickets and taxes on air tansport can be used for welfare of folk and improvement of environment. This money should be given to scientists, so that they can research and invent eco-friendly fuels which can be used in airplanes, and air transportation will become safe for environment. Moreover, this money can be used in planting trees specially near the airports as tees can absorb obnoxious gases and also reduce noise pollution.
Before putting my pen down, I concluded that levying moe tax will not influence the growing demand for more flights, but it can be useful in reducing other environment issues like deforestation, air and noise pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
...y, air transportation is introduced. It influence environment very badly and it is major ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...r reducing the number of ai passengers. According to me, this method is not much effective. My ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...es due to rise in tax, then it will not effect high community but it can be effective ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vement of environment. This money should be given to scientists, so that they can...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01818181818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94607400893 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9083172309 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20497739445 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721947139547 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764097018266 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138582255162 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503961126139 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.