The implications of an upsurge in demand for travelling by air for the environment is an alarming concern. A segment of society opines that imposing more tax on aviation industries can ameliorate this problem. In this essay, I will not only give some explanations why I advocate this idea, but also propose a practical alternative.
By introducing frequent flyer levy (LFF), the government may restrain aviation emissions. To be more specific, the more flights people take, the more they have to pay .According to a survey, 70% of flights are made by a wealthy 15% of the population. Focusing specifically on taxing frequent flyers would considerably reduce plane usage without limiting access to mobility for the many. Perhaps customers will consider thoroughly before purchasing any aviation services, simply because the tax on the 3rd flight is double than that on the 2nd.
Another pragmatic measurement to curb aviation emissions is a shift to environmentally friendly aeroplanes. By virtue of technological advancements, it may be feasible for our aircrafts to run on electricity or sustainable biofuels. It has been predicted that the atmospheric warming impacts by contrails( a trail of hot condensed water and Co2 released while airplanes fly, which may exacerbate global warming) can be halved in the following century if we cut down on non-renewable energy consumption. Therefore, the global temperature is likely to be limited to 25% of the current levels.
Taking everything into consideration, imposing more taxes on aviation services would be a sensible solution to the escalating environmental concerns. Besides, by chaging aircraft technology, emissions should be managed within an international framework.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51503759398 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25134942871 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672932330827 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6987822401 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190926369475 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586298748297 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676958892705 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102044761785 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669610679954 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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