To develop any nation ,it is quite essential to develop strength its basic body like health,education,trade ,technology,and so on if country is unable to focus on these sectors then slow growth is guaranted .Now the question is to help? Wealth , nations are wealthy because they give time for themself to be strong in this industrial area.
On the unitary hand, health, education and trade buzz ward of present world richer nations should help the poorer nation to overcame from these these issues .education start when we help other in their problem and providing help to them and health us basic desire for everyone .if richer countries have more resources for other nation development then they should help them because sharing is caring
On the other hand , richer authority should provide financial help to poorer nation to increase their yrade ( export and import) so, with the help ,of money poorer country increase domestic currency and decrease import to deppricate foreign currency .this is a sustable way for them to help each other For instance japan help india by giving financial support and donation of goods.
To sumup, great satisfication come from sharing with others .If developed country help developing countries this shows their education level I agree with this statement that richer government should help poorer countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23611111111 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67678139875 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 265.448088145 49.4020404114 537% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.75 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 20.7667163134 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374289692576 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197378331413 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879795519041 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231445271604 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791290331886 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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