With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.
Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the contemporary society, elderly people live a longer life due to the advancements in modern health care system. Owing to this, the number of senior citizens in the society have escalated and though dealing with them can come across as an issue, certain measures can be taken to manage them, which will be discussed in the following essay.
To begin with there are several ways which will not only be helpful with coping with the increasing figures of senior citizens but also manage to take care of them as well. Offices could support their employees by providing trained people to take care of the elder people in their home so that they can work stress free and there will be more employment opportunities for different people working in other sectors. Furthermore, the hospitals could assign the doctors and nurses to take care of the elderly people as a part of their internship in order to develop communication skills and patience, as dealing with the latter group can be an ardous task.
Along with the workers the youth and youngsters can also lent a helping hand. As part time job, groups of students can serve the seniors, for a slighly higher incentive, in order to attract more students in this field. This will not only foster better bonding between two generations but apart from gaining knowledge they will be able to master skills like communication and team work. In fact, the children could assist the youth as training while being guided to help them with the basic chores.
To sum up, coping with the increasing numbers of senior citizens can feel challenging especially with a majority of the population being career oriented but with certain measures in place this can be overcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, apart from, in fact, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88356164384 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47366500917 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0330809605 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410370428512 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153937170833 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679231571874 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248662066366 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070075284591 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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