An increase in production of consumer goods result in damage of the environment What are the reasons and possible solution

Essay topics:

An increase in production of consumer goods result in damage of the environment. What are the reasons and possible solution.

An rise in manufacturing of consumer goods leads to many problems to human being as well as harmful for the environment. The main reason behind this phenomenon is people show aristocratic lifestyle among the society. While, government have to recycle that waste products to reuse them again.

To begin with the causes first and foremost, population increasing day by day. So that, to fulfill their desires they prefer to buy new products which is launched in the market and throw old things outside from their home which give birth to many diseases and detrimental for human being as well as environment too. Moreover, in this modern world, people show their attitude and aristocratic lifestyle in front of other individuals. For example, people have hefty sum of money and donot decide to invest that money and purchase unnecessary things to use in their daily routine life. As a result, it is biggest menance that masses totally damaging the environment by discharge old things from their home.

On the flip side, administration have to recycle waste products to reuse them. So that, people can use that things again in their life. Which is a great step to solve to problem of dangerous diseases and environment pollution which is beyond comparison. Last but not the least, masses have to avoid buying non-biodegradable products because these products donot mix in the garbage and remain same and leads to many health hazards. Individuals have to use biodegradable products to save the environment.

To recapitulate, individuals and government have to share their responsibilities to overcome from this major issue.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
An rise in manufacturing of consumer goods...
^^
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...istocratic lifestyle among the society. While, government have to recycle that waste ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18631178707 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89341370661 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551330798479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1389317216 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138681096407 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486758579979 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523845123348 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816977184274 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657515029621 0.056905535591 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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