The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that the idea of whether an increasing number of massive production of goods sold to consumers is the main factor to impact on natural environment remains controversy. In my opinion, I entirely agree with this idea and mention the reasons as well as solutions of this issue.
To begin with, there is a wide range of causes leading to environment degradation because of good production overload. The first one could be that an enormous amount of emissions, fumes exceeding allowable level from manufactories are released into environment, causing the greenhouse effect and extinction for some endangered species. Moreover, if this circumstance is more likely to maintain with no sign of reduction, it will damage seriously to human health such as cancer. From government perspective, country have a tendency to suffer from decline of population causing a lack of human resource for employment. Therefore, it is more urgent to have some actions to tackle it
As some causes mentioned above, some actions need to be taken to address this issue. In terms of citizens, inhabitants should take responsibility for protecting the environment from negative impacts such as reusing some products possibly used again, achieving sustainable development, using alterable energy. If a whole of citizens are conscious to the significant role of environment, pollution issue can be alleviated. From government perspective, some environment policies should be enacted and enforced by authorities and citizens. As a result, most of citizens will be more likely not to deplete natural resources or environment for their own sake. Therefore, the environment will be protected from some risks
In conclusion, it seems to be important to understand deeply about this issue and have some solutions for this issues. This issue needs to be taken into consideration seriously by national authorities and citizens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42953020134 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0950168527 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7724236776 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241827451292 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088172550818 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392243003236 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15723157776 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275080635862 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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