An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage of our natural environment. What are the causes and solutions?
It is true that, the demand of consumer goods is increasing at an alarming rate.In this present day and age, huge number of consumer goods are produced by manufacturers to fulfill the demand of consumers .As a consequence, this ongoing phenomenon is deteriorating the natural ecology. This essay intends to examine not only the factors which are accountable behind this worrying concern but also suggest some remedies to address this issue in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
Setting wheel to motion, there are manifold reasons which are associated with this trend.First and foremost, increase in population as currently, population is incredibly high in all over the globe. Needless to say, if the population is more then the demand of goods such as clothes, electronic appliances and other basic products will also be rise. Hence, to meet the demand of customers,more number of industries are established by the regime while producing goods these factories emit hazardous chemicals and gases by the way of smoke.As a result, environment gets polluted. Besides it, the another considerable point is to mention is that, advertisement has great influence on the life of human being. To demonstrate, after a second new product is launched by companies due to advancement in technology with high tech features, and after seeing advertisements masses get allure towards these goods, and start demanding as well as individuals are adopting use and throw policy, and after use the product at once they throw it away such as cold drink cans ,water bottles and so on even if, these products are usable for once more; therefore, the demand of consumer products arise, and contaminate the environment.
Moving further, there are numerous ways by adopting which this trouble can be sorted out. Principally, governing body can come up with some policies in regards to control the population. In other words, if population is controlled such as one child policy launched in China. Thus, demand for consumer goods will automatically shrink out, and environment can be saved. Furthermore, awareness campaigns should be organised in order to encourage the users to use biodegradable products like paper bags instead of using plastic bags or non- biodegradable products can be banned completely. As a result, it helps to save the environment from contamination.
To recapitulate, although, the production of consumer products is increasing due to ample of reasons,and putting deleterious effects on ecology, government is not implementing stringent rules to restrain this issue from its roots
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, by the way, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32518337408 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02781110353 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581907090465 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.015578363 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.571428571 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2142857143 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203567077212 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065719615226 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634617789967 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121944411473 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117481388578 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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