The proliferation in producing commodity which serves people's needs accounts for exacerbating natural habitat. This occurs due to the profit made from products as well as rising needs. To deal with this situation, authorities and governments must go head-first to promulgate laws in order to orientate inhabitants' awareness.
Involving in manufacturing products is the fastest way to make a mass profit. Therefore, people and companies would invest in any means to make money, even damaging the environment. For instance, back in 2010, an sweet company in Vietnam was charged for the enormous consequences of their uncontrolled emissions to the sea, which results in the death of thousands of fish. The company will be reoperated by a new director under a new label. Apart from this, since our needs keep peaking due to the change of contemporary days, new products must be made to satisfy. It would be troublesome to completely cease factories from manufacturing new goods.
As it is hard to shut it down, solutions are indispensable to ameliorate this problem. A country producing activity is always fiercely controlled by its government, therefore, they have to take action on alerted times. By promulgating laws on using and pumping wastes into natural habitats, environmental damages would be deterred. For example, after being charged for over 1 million dollars, the new owner of the latter sweet company has pledged to dedicate 10 percent of its profit to the environmental preservation operations. Nevertheless, the authorities they own will not make vast changes but the whole society will. Conciousing consequences and how necessary the environment is, consumers should choose productions widely. Eco-friendly bags or organic straws are prime examples.
In conclusion, comprehending the rationale for damages and making unanimous decisions over this universal problem would support our planet's life.
- Nowadays more and more people want to travel to remote areas such as the South Pole Do the advantages of this type of travel outweigh the disadvantages 84
- Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success while others believe that it depends on other factors Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- In the past people stored knowledge in books nowadays people store knowledge on the internet Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit Discuss both these views and give 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47796610169 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12618101785 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637288135593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8245989158 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136384766151 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395957770303 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401210348213 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766064712153 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193833111894 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.