With the increase in use of the Internet, books will soon become unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, the internet has been rapidly and profoundly changing the way people obtain knowledge. a growing number of people prefer using the internet instead of books to reading. In my opinion, although the internet is an indispensable thing it still can not replace the importance of the book.
Admittedly, the internet has some vital advantages that can ameliorate individual acquire knowledge. First is convenience, there is an abundance of the latest information on the internet, and people can find what they want straightforwardly. In other words, people just need to carry a tablet computer or a phone which is equivalent to plenty of books. The second is efficiency, internet technology creates the metamorphosis in the method of pursuing knowledge. For example, many books are animated or narrated into videos and posted on social media platforms. Therefore, it can not only let people understand the content more clearly but also improving efficiency.
However, books still possess impregnable reasons that it should still need to exist. On the one hand, when books are published they should verify and proofread many times by experts so it can provide the correct information to people. Nevertheless, the knowledge on the internet usually has a risk about their accuracy because it can be modified at any time and anyone. On the other hand, books are sustainability and substance rather than information on the internet can easily be destroyed by hackers. Therefore, unless cybersecurity is impeccable otherwise books are still an essential appliance to preserve knowledge.
In conclusion, the internet can be judged as a useful tool to receive information, but books will still be an integral part of our lives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...anging the way people obtain knowledge. a growing number of people prefer using t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32116788321 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04283273467 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.1185376098 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126882820449 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474197807093 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346145304279 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918769597398 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250793987363 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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