The increased world demand for oil and gas has made its necessary for locating these sources in remote and untouched natural areas .do you think advantage outweighs disadvantage damaging these natural areas ?
In current eon, crude oil and gases are highly demand. Individual prefer to use more convenient resources like person cab and bike,which increases the consumption. The developing nations demand for oil and gas has made it behoove for locating these sources in remote and untouched natural areas. I think pros outweighs cons in distributing these natural areas.
It is a fundamental duty of every citizen to save environment. In modern technology their are certain innovative tools are used which does not harm land or surrounding areas .though environmentalists oppose many times but land in which drilling is done is reused for residential purposes. Oil and gas became the major sources of income .their are several places where it is found in abundant number. For instance, Antarctica is a cold place where mineral resources are more found and currently researchers are researching in that area.
As we all know that every country used to import the products and earn foreign exchange. Likewise, if oil and gas are found more they can drill and import in other country where there is scarcity and earn a number of amount. For example, in Iran oil is found more so,they sell to country like India where there is more demand and scarcity of it and earn bucks .Overall, it can helps to increase the economic standard and gross domestic product.
To conclude, I recapitulate although at some point drilling affects the global warming, there are more benefits of it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, so, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06147540984 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71484112777 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.947038528 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270631049593 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980184288389 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130900267327 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148394283881 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153229644222 0.056905535591 269% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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