Some people think that is is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree?

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Some people think that is is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree?

In current eon ,population is rampant increasing and due to it scarcity of shelter is found. Few folks think that it is significant to grow plants in wide areas of burg and metropolitan than to construct house. I entirely agree that planting trees ought to be put top priority over housing. This essay will critique paramount decisive impact of trees in clear field of urban area.

To breath every living being require fresh air, which in modern and populated nation it becomes difficult to find pure air without dust particles. Human race works for only profit motive and due to which instead of planting new trees they destroy it for earning more buck's .Trees are essential for human beings as it brings rain ,it gives oxygen to breath, it provides medicine which help to cure and also bestow furniture wood.In recent, Amazon forest ,which is biggest forest in the world was fired and a plethora trees where burned.

Plants inhale carbon dioxide and release oxygen through out the day, which helps human beings to breath. Presently, it became troublesome to inhale pure air .Recently, in Delhi one shop opened in which one can breath pure oxygen by paying certain amount for particular period. myriad of society visited there and took the benefits of it .I think ,in future one have to pay for breathing an oxygen. moreover, due to declined in number of trees problem of global warming arises.Presently, in Antarctica polar region is melting day by day.

To conclude, I recapitulate although shelter is behoove for surviving, planting trees in clear region are more crucial in modern world.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97769516729 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49598840675 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.816969688 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153930975427 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608019739349 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052880962157 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104878643162 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520262394472 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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