An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled?
A lot of people believe that advertisements aim at children are increasing fastly. I think this notion is true and these commercial should be controlled due to many bad effect on life style of young viewer.
Commercials , which bombard the programme on kid channels, have negative impacts on the eating habits and personalities of children. Firstly, in the modern world, due to the mass commercial of junk-foods or fast foods as delicious and spectacular meals, children are likely to consume and enjoy these kinds of food, which have highly saturated fat, instead of traditional and nutritious foods. More young people will face to dangerous diseases like heart attack or diabetes that always believed the problem of old people. furthermore, many advertisements with adult content as drug and alcohol or violent films and games trailers are allowed to present between the break of the children programme, which are easily contaminate children’s minds. Hence, these types of advertising raise curiosities of children negatively and make them tend to consume these products or act like violent characters on films that were watched by children.
It is clear that although in these modern days, commercials become a useful marketing tool for companies that can help them to introduce their products to consumers or raising the awareness of people about new, it still has negative influences to people, especially the young generation. Therefore, controlling the information on each advertising is the most effective for solving these problems. Concretely, the Government should impose the law that can reduce the unhealthy information of promotions on TV.
In conclusion, the negative influences of commercials on children become extremely serious, as I discussed , the television advertising should be controlled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, therefore, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52857142857 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04304291055 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5135644652 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.727272727 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270324527078 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113549782798 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106013492717 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200028863861 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913700670064 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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