An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled?
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Writing Task 2: An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled?
It is true that children are one of the largest target audience of a great deal of television commercials these days. Although these advertisements have some negative impacts on youngsters, I personally think it should not be regulated.
Being continuously exposed to manipulative television advertisements may result in bad consequences to the child development in terms of personality and health. Marketers are such talents in bombarding immature youngsters with messages that these products are so much cool that children will be super happy if they own it. When they are primed for a lifestyle of consumerism, they may become unreasonable and demanding. Also, several products being marketed can harmful to youngsters’ health and eating habits. Things like junk foods and drinks should not be advertised in a way that attract children. For example, how Coca Cola commercials advertise for a type of soft drink that is so refreshing that children cannot resist their temptation while watching these advertisements.
In fact, although I dislike these manipulative television commercials, I do not support a ban on them for some reasons. First of all, it is pretty problematic to enact such a ban because the target audience is quite broad. Besides, youngsters these days are exposed to many types of advertisements, not from a single resource. Second, it is the parents’ responsibility to make sure their children not led astray by unscrupulous marketing. More and more issues with children are being blamed for external factors, but no one really looks at the heart of the matter in that it’s parents’ job to raise and educate their children.
All in all, there are some downsides of the fact that a large proportion of TV advertising campaigns is focusing on youngsters. Parents should be the one to protect their children from these manipulative commercials rather than controlling them.
Writing Task 2: Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?
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- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee 73
- An increasing number of advertisements on TV aim at children. What are the effects of television advertising? Should television advertising be controlled? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38718662953 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23721464575 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565459610028 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0860795898 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0952380952 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446497027632 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155980609176 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19059484425 0.0667982634062 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287779060926 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.290329824098 0.056905535591 510% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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