An increasing number of children have become hooked on fat food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?
It is sufficiently apparent that fat food and beverage make up a large portion of children’s diet, which results in an increase in number of obese adolescents. In this essay, I’ll elaborate on issues associated with obesity and propose some plausible resolution.
To start with, since the onset of extreme upsurging over-weight case, authoritative researches have been conducted to indicate the relevance between obesity and cardiovascular disease. It is commonsensical knowledge that every single cell in human body is suppled with oxygen and nutrition via inner fluid by blood pressure. The bigger individuals’ body mass is, the higher oxygen and nutrition intake they require, which leads to greater forces on vessel wall and culminates in high blood pressure ailment. Besides, not only does obesity cause a spike in bad cholesterol and triglyxeride level but also lowers HDL cholesterol, which is crucial to get rid of bad cholesterol and reduce the risk of heart disease.
However, there are plethora of measures that could be taken to alleviate the problems. First and foremost, people will need to curb on their consumption of high fat content food and aerated drinks and supplement their bodies with necessary vitamins and minerals, which guarantee normal functioning of organs. Secondly, along with a balanced diet, individuals also need to work out on a daily basis to remove excess subcutaneous fat, increase metabolism rate which in turn develop heart well-being.
In conclusion, tremendously increasing multitude of over-weight people can follow hazardous health-related problems. To address this, a variety of solutions are proven to be efficacious, such as taking up healthy diet and doing exercise on a daily basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45555555556 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03926070355 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67037037037 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5541069168 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219128466908 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720424407737 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700617566949 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131360824949 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949065665566 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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