the diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chains in the center of the Pacific ocean. write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown.
The diagram provides information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific. From an overall perspective, the major islands encompass 8 smaller counterparts, which is maul, Kahoolawe, Lanai, Molokai, Oahu, Kauai, Niihau and the largest Hawaii.
The complex locating on the Pacific tectonic made up from layers of solid dense rock, which shifts towards north east direction for 7-9 cm, or thereabouts, per year. Consequently, the islands are situated parallel the moving direction of the plate, with the oldest volcanos dating back to 80 million years located furthest from the originated position.
Concerning the formation of young volcano mountain, it is the result of numerous eruptions, whose origination is 2883 km below sea level. There lies a large repository of magma in a hot spot spume remaining static. The magma spume then rises to a narrow channel. When the amount of magma is sufficiently accumulated in the spume, an eruption is triggered.
- Some people argue holding sporting events is beneficial to a country s development Other people hold the opposite opinion Discuss both view and give your own opinion 84
- The charts below show the percentage of the energy generate from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003 To summarize information by selecting key characteristics and compiling a report and if necessary make a comparison 78
- Some people focus on news in their own country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about current events However others believe that they can learn news better through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'spumes'.
Suggestion: spumes
... spot spume remaining static. The magma spume then rises to a narrow channel. When th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30322580645 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8148853626 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.735483870968 0.547539520022 134% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7839114974 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13289916275 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605589860667 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112310062492 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873236995421 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786808319218 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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