The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that when drawing an analogy with the past, the crime rate is significantly decreased thanks to the advances in technology. From my own perspective, I partly agree with this notion as technology also follows new type of laws infraction.
On the one hand, due to tremendous development in technology, there has been an upsurge in the number of cybercrime cases. In recent days, criminals have increasingly utilized Internet as its anonymity facilitates surreptitiously illegal transaction and they stand lower chances of getting caught by the police. Furthermore, stealing personal information is exacerbated since the advent of high-tech given that more individuals store their private data in devices such as phone or laptop. With just one indiscriminate click into strange link, people’ computers are prone to vicious viruses that are capable of deriving information from the memory. According to statistic collected in 2020, there was nearly 4.1 million reported cases of identity theft.
On the other hand, it is irrefutable that technology is one of the most efficacious tools in combating legislation infringement. Firstly, advances in camera, face identity software and the like have allowed army forces to identify offender within small amount of time. For example, detective officers use programs in computer to analyze fingerprints taken in crime scene or deriving video from nearby neighbor to assist solving procedure. Secondly, the appearance of high-end devices can deter people from committing crimes due to the fear of being arrested. Hence, the number of law-breaking cases, especially burglars, will plummet.
In conclusion, notwithstanding appearance of cybercrime, the crucial role of technology in reducing crime is undeniable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62546816479 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10750848977 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692883895131 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4747446121 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144266963733 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450564073398 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564004382088 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955310731028 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646422081069 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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