An increasing number of people are buying what they need online
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies of shopping online?
Online shopping is gaining its importance day by day in modern generation, and people consider it as an easy way of buying things. There are many advantages in purchasing stuffs through internet but still it has some drawbacks as well to a company and a person.
To begin, nowadays everyone has a very tough schedule and most of them need to stuck with this schedule and due to which they don’t have enough time for shopping, exercise and other daily routine works. Therefore, most individuals try to make their daily routine easy for himself/herself and due to which they prefer to perform most of their daily works through internet either from their offices are from homes. For example, many people pay their utility bills online and it save most of their time, some booked their ticket online instead of buying it from shops etc. As a result they saved a lot of their time.
Secondly, many companies have generated their online shopping portal and due to this they earn enough amount of money through online shopping made from them. Even education institutes have an advance internet system and most of them receive their tuition fees, admission fees and other charges through online bill payment.
However, in spite of these advantages, there are still a lot of drawbacks to these online shopping to both people and companies. For instance, many individual make their shopping online by ordering shoes, t-shirts and jeans etc, and there will be chance of size, quality and many more things.
In contrast, many companies face different types of problems in online shopping, such as, people often booked their stuffs by means of internet but then they refused to buy it due to some problems.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: To begin, nowadays everyone has a very tough schedule and most of them need to stuck with this schedule and due to which they don't have enough time for shopping, exercise and other daily routine works.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and stuck
Sentence: For example, many people pay their utility bills online and it save most of their time, some booked their ticket online instead of buying it from shops etc. As a result they saved a lot of their time.
Description: The fragment it save most is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace save with verb, past tense
flaws:
The fourth and fifth paragraph should be put in one paragraph for disadvantages.
and there should be one more paragraph for conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 289 350
No. of Characters: 1374 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.123 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.754 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.23 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.024 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.427 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.734 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.166 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saves'?
Suggestion: saves
...e pay their utility bills online and it save most of their time, some booked their t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272727272727 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.128526645768 0.155533422707 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103448275862 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0407523510972 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0783699059561 0.0437548338989 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119122257053 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0188087774295 0.0403226058552 47% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.39516057547 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0376175548589 0.0326793684256 115% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0501567398119 0.0861772015684 58% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00313479623824 0.021408717616 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00626959247649 0.011925033212 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1709.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95470383275 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355400696864 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236933797909 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163763066202 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0905923344948 0.137316102897 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39516057547 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515679442509 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.1411303914 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0909090909 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9203151229 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.363636364 127.492653851 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 0.814263465372 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.7842888818 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.6582278481 1.69124875643 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382184055719 0.332605444948 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145268368747 0.102741220458 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0738950630311 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.680557143677 0.534860350844 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144508785589 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182853752346 0.134430193775 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603335220809 0.0742795772207 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288796313885 0.324371583561 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0736938694586 0.0638462369009 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2457908925 0.228012699653 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697879001901 0.058150111329 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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