An increasing number of people are changing careers during their working life. What are the reasons for this? Does it have a positive or negative development for society?
it is every day more common to hear about people changing jobs to new areas they were not previous">previously familiarized with. Mainly because of the fast pace of technology and the job market. Recent innovations, such as, artificial intelligence and machine learning have created many high paying jobs that did not exist 20 years ago. but they have also destroyed many middle level positions that were previous">previously done by humans, forcing these workers to adapt and reinvent themselves. Moving to new fields and positions they had not done before. In the next paragraphs I will state my reasons to believe this increasing trend of changing of careers has negatively affected society and quality of life.
In the first place, changing careers means there are people who no longer can or want to practice their previous career. we should be asking ourselves, why is this happening? Two university professors from Harvard university have published a novel research argueing the fear of becoming obsolete is the main reason to change careers. Therefore, the trend of changing careers originates from an uncertain job market that does not allows workers to feel confident about their future job prospectives and not from pure desire for change. Generating a feeling of constant struggle and stress that affects worker's quality of life.
Additionaly, the rise of changes in people's careers means it is becoming harder to find real experts of their respective fields. While this might not be critical for many job posts or fields, there are areas where expertise is a critical requierement. For example, the health sector needs profesisonals with vast experience in the field in order to diagnose illnesses and treating them correctly. The additional difficulty to find this experts will mean that in the future we will be treated by people with less experience. increasing the risk of mistreatment or accidental deaths.
Nevertheless, it is true that in spite of the lack of experienced professionals; innovation has not stop. this could mean that technology will find ways to fill the expertise gaps in the professional entering critical fields like healthcare or transportation and allow them to continue offering the previous service level we are used to.
In conclusion, people changing careers midway their working life has had negative effects in society and people's quality of life. However, there is still hope that technology might help mitigated this adverse effects. but until then, workers will have to fight with the constant fear of becoming obsolete and the lack of experienced professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, it is true, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35251798561 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09179026696 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551558752998 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6213090853 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61904761905 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311300373849 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794185346696 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824826804146 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160119908892 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793002876461 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.