An increasing number of professional, such as doctors and teachers, are living their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause?What can be done to deal with this situation.
The growing number of skilled people in health and education field are immigrating to developed regions of the world and leaving their nations.In this essay we will disscuss about the problems which insist people to leave their countries and also we will explain the solution.
Firstly,the low salaries and the less growth opportunities for professions are theone main reason if compare the wages rate of developed countries with undeveloped nations,there is a huge difference. in addition, the growth opportunities are not available to people in the third world countries as compare to first world countries.for example, they have no access to new technology and equipment in order to provide services to their clients the same case also happen with teachers too. teachers do not have an advance technology which they need to teach their students practical knowledge.for example,they do not have access to Internet in the poorer countries or multimedia in the classrooms.So, that makes a Barrier.
On the other hand,if the government impose a rule to increase the salaries of professionals like Doctor or teachers.So, this will overcome these problems and also government should give compensation to professionals and provide them growth opportunities. So, they can improve their skills,In the result they will give benefit to country.
In addition to this authorities must need to provide latest instruments, technology and facilities.For example ,Internet,computer and multimedia and other scientific instruments which is required to achieve results by professionals.
To conclude,the major problems are low salaries, less opportunities and no access to technology to overcome these problems government should increase wages, create opportunities and provide new technology to professionals.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ities. So, they can improve their skills,In the result they will give benefit to co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, third, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73507462687 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33907275804 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.004166522 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.125 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193885132412 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081554762418 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340427425458 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956140370573 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426200723461 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ation field are immigrating to developed regions of the world and leaving their n...
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Suggestion: In
... of the world and leaving their nations.In this essay we will disscuss about the p...
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...and also we will explain the solution. Firstly,the low salaries and the less gr...
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...e will explain the solution. Firstly,the low salaries and the less growth opport...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ns are theone main reason if compare the wages rate of developed countries with u...
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...loped countries with undeveloped nations,there is a huge difference. in addition, the ...
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...ped nations,there is a huge difference. in addition, the growth opportunities are ...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e growth opportunities are not available to people in the third world countries a...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nology and equipment in order to provide services to their clients the same case...
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...me case also happen with teachers too. teachers do not have an advance technology which...
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...untries or multimedia in the classrooms.So, that makes a Barrier. On the other ...
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Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...untries or multimedia in the classrooms.So, that makes a Barrier. On the other hand,i...
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...at makes a Barrier. On the other hand,if the government impose a rule to increas...
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...f professionals like Doctor or teachers.So, this will overcome these problems and ...
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...ities. So, they can improve their skills,In the result they will give benefit to co...
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Suggestion: these
...ive benefit to country. In addition to this authorities must need to provide latest...
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...dition to this authorities must need to provide latest instruments, technology and facilities....
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...ogy and facilities.For example ,Internet,computer and multimedia and other scientific ins...
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...results by professionals. To conclude,the major problems are low salaries, less o...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun opportunities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...de,the major problems are low salaries, less opportunities and no access to technolo...
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Line 8, column 115, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
... access to technology to overcome these problems government should increase wages, creat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, third, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73507462687 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33907275804 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.004166522 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.125 106.682146367 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193885132412 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081554762418 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340427425458 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956140370573 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426200723461 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.