An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.
What problems does this cause?
What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, it is common for most specialists, including doctors and teachers to move to industrialized states instead of working in their underdeveloped countries. This essay will first suggest that the main problem this causes is the shortage of professionals in poor countries and propose creating more facilities and high salaries for employees as a possible solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
The primary problem of so many well-qualified workers deciding to work in developed countries is the scarcity of skilled experts in developing countries, making it impossible for them to improve the economic situation and enhance the standards of living of poor population. This means, if majority of professionals such as doctors and teachers migrate to foreign countries, the citizens of these countries may struggle to get basic facilities like medical treatment or education. As a result, they need to buy such services from advanced countries which leads further expenses and make them even poorer. For example, the recent research conducted by the World Health Organization found that the mortality rate in the third world countries is relatively high because of the lack of skilled doctors.
A viable solution to this issue can be offering bright prospects through providing better job environment with handsome salary. That is to say, the government may prevent such brain-drain by creating decent work conditions and increasing salaries up to an amount that is paid in the developed countries. By doing so, the employers can persuade professionals to stay and build their career in their home country instead of abandoning it. For instance, in the 1940s, South Korea was an underdeveloped country and by funding so much money for improving job facilities and education, its economy developed vigorously, making it one of the leading countries in Asia.
In conclusion, the major problem that brain-drain causes is the lack of experienced workers in developing countries and it can be solved by providing convenience and competitive salary to the professionals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45510835913 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10127101248 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7086981122 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.181818182 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340502111335 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11961207935 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399243517147 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198382118675 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385955137529 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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