With the rise of e books comes the decline in paper books Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books.Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

As electronic books are getting used more widely, printed books are becoming less popular. For some, this development seems positive, while others think differently.This essay will first suggest that the convenience of using such books is the primary benefit, while the risk of poor eyesight is the substantial drawback.

The main reason most people choose e-books is because this sort of books can be carried and stored easily, which makes them convenient to read. Today's modern technologies create chance for readers to store thousands of digital books on a single device as well as to adjust fonts according to the reader's preference. This allows them to use their books whenever or wherever they want. According to the recent report of the Guardian approximately 76 percent of students in the UK prefer to use electronic books rather than paper books because of its convenience.

In spite of these facilities, screen glare eyestrain are serious concerns for many users of e-books. The display resolution of computer screens and mobile devices is incredibly less than the print quality which is produced by a printing press. Therefore the majority of e-book readers are likely to hurt their eyes, as the recent survey shows, in Japan, over 70 percent of patients who complained about their eyesight were the people who read e-books regularly.

In conclusion, reading books through modern technologies may provide availability and effortlessness, yet people should keep in mind that there are certain health risks associated with this trend and it should be taken into consideration before choosing types of books.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3023255814 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74435027757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65503875969 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6671711691 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.8 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266589430132 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102095286851 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626513503772 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156542828534 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588921014255 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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