With an increasing population communication via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?
According to statement, with proliferation in rate of population, conversation skill become prominent through internet access and texting. However, in person communication will go towards extinction and become part of past decade. Therefore, I completely agree with this notion and reasons are are justified in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in modern era, advancement in innovations of technology becomes increase with time period and internet access is one of most prominent innovation of science. Due to advancement of internet connections, every individual become netizen. Thus, they prefer conversation via internet which includes video conferencing, texting, chatting and so on rather in person conversate. Because, such methods are more comfortable and convinient to modern generation for usage of communication. For instance, video conference become more favourable for overseas students especially in pandemic situation. Because, in that catastrophic period, students use internet facilities for their academics at home instead of to travel abroad. Therefore, they avoid face to face communication which will results toward their extinction.
Moreover, excess utilisation of internet and texting in large companies and business sectors for preservation of time. Because, in such business meetings, agents prefer video conference in comparison to travel for long distances especially with foreign dealer. Due to which, they manage their time and schedule in appropriate manner. Thus, they prohibit in person conferences. In addition, in form of texting, they transfer documents and presentations to agents and business partners. Due to such facilities, conversations via in person will run towards extinction and preferability regards text and internet will proliferate.
To recapitulate, it seems to me as, video conference, chating with internet connection and texting become more valuable method of conversation due to numerous advantages. Yet, in person communication skills will become part of past eras and extinct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96928327645 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22227321128 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.379782452 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250688667936 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777246188508 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698835249908 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167975823383 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464553412992 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.05 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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