Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
The most effective method to prevent traffic jams and pollution issues is inflating the cost of petrol. In my opinion, growing the cost of petrol is a key to reduce the percentage of CO2 emissions. However, I also believe that electric cars are beneficial for the environment.
Nowadays, petrol is one of the well-known contaminant. The cities with population over than one million people are more likely to having the foul air because there are a positive correlation between the number of people and cars. Majority of citizens are using old cars which produce a lot of negative substance. For example, my uncle is driving on an old automobile which was established in 1999, and this car absorb a lot of petrol. As a result, old automobiles generate more CO2 emissions in comparison with new automobiles. To solve this problem, governments of urban areas should decrease the number of old cars, but also they should educate people by explaining people that CO2 emissions are bad for health.
Electric cars give a way to green planet, and health lives. Firstly, the modern car uses only the battery which can be charged in electric stations. On top of that, electric cars do not endanger the lives of million people around the world, therefore the life expectancy of our planet can be longer. According to the Tesla Company, the principal promised that the price of electric cars will be decreased. Consequently, electric cars will be affordable for everybody. Evidently, electric cars play a significant role in reduction the pollution problem.
To conclude, the world’s destiny in our hands. Also, government should explain people “Why the percentage of pollution problem caused by cars is not decrease? How human activity detrimental to the world?”. These steps will help government to make eco-cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16161616162 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85781836433 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579124579125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1623511895 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6842105263 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0996558390955 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322252911737 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321994963988 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615169861636 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327317877166 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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