With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Nowadays, with the advances of science and technology, people are received splendid assistances from machines. Furthermore, works will be conducted by machinery in lieu of people. In my opinion, while I am more convinced that modern technology brings enormous benefits to society and the development of mankind, I believe that some drawbacks can still exist in many aspects.
In aforementioned situations, there are numerous reasons why utilizing machines in all fields are encouraged in many countries. First and foremost, it is undeniable that not only do machines substitute the roles of people in working, but they also create more marvellous results and performance in many sectors such as agriculture. For example, in England and a lot of developed nations, robots are increasingly gaining the popularity in recruiting for many works such as transporting. Especially, in education and public heath care, robots are considered as enthusiastic volunteers in helping the elder and supporting teachers in instructing children. Secondly, world while applications of machinery are remarkable solutions in leading people to escape from tumultuous and miserable lives. In addition, people can pay attention to improving and enhancing the living standards.
On the other hand, some evidences can be indicated that mass-produced machines can impose a noticeable threat to many fields and even viability of human beings. The explanation can be assumed that when the more common artificial brain is, the more conscious the degradation of health is. For instance, nowadays in Japan where the first robot was invented and acknowledged, scientists have anxieties in imposing the roles of robots. The laziness of people can be anticipated. As a result, many fatal diseases such as obesity and diabetes can appear and threaten to longevity of people as their laziness.
In conclusion, despite tremendous and prominent advantages that machines generate for people, I reckon that losing control of applying technology can trigger negative trends in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... trigger negative trends in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57827476038 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07930210942 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613418530351 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1688678697 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.4 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0666666667 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171933041367 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053218522722 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386200952231 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995467724274 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380455698227 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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